Havell Markus
Dr. Allison Parker
ENG 102
11 June 2014
As a common saying
goes: “People should fight their own battles instead of having others fight it
for them”. As cliché as that quote
sounds, it definitely holds its merits, especially in the recent conversations
revolving around the Human Right to Education.
After spending countless hours reading various articles relating to the Right
to Education (RTE) on the popular news channels — CNN, The New York Times, Huffington
Post, and Aljazeera — that quote perfectly captured my expression. Now you might be wondering what is all the
commotion about RTE and people fighting their own fights. Well let me tell you! I noticed governments of many African countries and nations such as Pakistan, Bangladesh, Afghanistan, and India
should be ashamed of their hollow efforts to ensure the every child’s Right to
Education. These government’s actions
look good from far, but are far from good.
Other humanitarian organizations such as UNICEF, UN Watch, Islamic Human
Right Commissions, etc. have contributed more to their country’s fight to
achieve global educational goals than their own efforts. Today I want to highlight one such country
that fails to fight for their own rights.
Malala's Speech at the United Nations
The name “Malala
Yousafzai”, does it ring a bell? That name
used to belong to an ordinary Pakistani girl, but now it has become a global icon
of the girls’ right to education. This15 year old was a victim of an attempted assassination by the Taliban in October 2013 simply because she raised her voice for wanting all girls to go to school (Hays). As cruel and inhumane as
that sounds, wait until you hear about the Pakistani government’s callous and
heartless response to the incidence. In
his article “Ghost Education”, Huma Yusuff, a columnist for the Pakistani
newspaper Dawn and a renowned scholar, discusses about the political stunt the
government played by passing the “Right to Free and Compulsory Education Bill”
in 2012. In the article, Yusuff directs
its reader’s attention to many facts that highlight the fallouts of the
bill. He states, “Twenty-five million
children are currently out of school, including seven million who have yet to
receive any form of primary schooling… Infrastructure is inadequate: Only 62
percent of public schools have toilets and only 39 percent have electricity… 25,000
so-called ghost schools in Pakistan, schools that exist on paper but are used
for other purposes… Only 2.3 percent of Pakistan’s 2012-13 budget is allocated
to education, compared with 18.4 percent of gross domestic product for defense”
(Yusuf) . All these facts are cited with credible
governmental database, and researched articles.
This builds to the logos and ethos of Yusuf’s argument since he shows
his argument is reliable and credible.
He uses all these facts to draw a logical conclusion that “the law’s
timing makes it seem more like a political calculation than a true commitment” (Yusuf) . Thus, he effectively shows the bill intends
to demonstrate to the world the Pakistani government’s official commitment to universal
education; however, it is useless because “the government does not take further budgetary action to implement it”.
This article
really opens readers eyes, and really troubles them.
How could a government be so devious? Is it not the government job to uphold its citizen’s welfare? Through passing such an empty law, which only
seeks to win votes rather than helping children in need is sickening. Pakistani government used the incidence of an
innocent girl to pull a political stunt in front of their citizens and the
entire world. This all leads to one
conclusion, all Pakistani citizens must unite and combine their efforts to
place responsible leaders who will look after and protect their rights. Humanitarian organizations could only go so
far, since even they have limits. If the
people themselves cannot fight for their own rights, how can someone else? If the people cannot show a lot of care for
their own right to education, how can some one else care more about it? If Malala Yousafzai, a 15 year old girl,
could stand up against the notorious Taliban and societal constraints to fight
for her educational right as a girl, is it too much to ask others to do the
same? Humanitarian organizations will
always be by sides of individuals who have their rights infringed upon;
however, it is time for people themselves to stand on their own sides.
Work
Cited:
Yusuff, Huma. "Ghost Education." Latitude
Ghost Education Comments. The New
York Times, 16 Nov. 2012. Web. 12 June 2014.
York Times, 16 Nov. 2012. Web. 12 June 2014.
Hays, Julie. "Pakistani Teen Inspires
Others to Fight for Education." CNN. Cable
News Network, 01 Jan. 1970. Web. 12 June 2014.
News Network, 01 Jan. 1970. Web. 12 June 2014.
Havell,
ReplyDeleteThis was a great post, and an even better way to start off your blog. It really sets a tone and aggressive pace for the human right that matters to you, and to all of us. You used the video early, in conjunction with the story itself, to introduce your post's topic, and then developed it into a larger-scale view. That was perfect, and a great way to organize it. You did a really good job with the language of the post. It feels like you were making it professional, yet personal at the same time, and it was easy notice your passion for this human right. Even better, you rhetorically analyzed Yusuff's article, which produced your own ethos. You used logical information to demonstrate your point and the changes that need to be made. With the story of Malala, you incorporated pathos, which was great for hooking the reader. To top it all off, you related your conclusion back to the quote in your introduction, that we and those who wish for this situation to get better, need to make a stand, and not expect things to change on their own. Awesome post, sir!
Brandon Navarro
Naimah Furqan
ReplyDelete"I am Mahala". This is a very brave girl and she ties brillantly into your thesis. Great use of ethos. The flow of your blog is very organized and smooth. “People should fight their own battles instead of having others fight it for them” is profound. Who knows your battle or struggle more than you; which is more of a reason to be your own advocate. Your blog is thought provoking and stimulating.
Havell,
ReplyDeleteYour're blog post serves as a great example to the assignment. Very well written, your use of visual aids in the form of videos is awesome. I have heard Mahala's story before, but your personal interest and passion regarding her struggle is very informative and much appreciated. Like I stated before, very well written blog post, I kept interested and look forward to reading your future posts on the subject. Job well done!
-Luisa Romero
Havell, I like the video you used for your assignment I thought it was a good example. I have never heard Mahala's story before. It as an interesting story I realize this seemed personal to you and I thought you did great job. I look forward to see your newer post. Your blog is one of the best
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