Havell Markus
Dr. Allison Parker
ENG 102
17 June 2014
What do you think
is more important quality or quantity?
The importance of quality or quantity is an old debate topic in our
society. There exists not one sole
answer to this question, since it is entirely dependent on the relative
situation. So, in the case of education,
is the quality or the number of people getting an education important? You might say, well both are important. The more people get quality education the
better it is and I agree. However, today
our country, the United States of America, struggles with maximizing quality
and quantity of education. It is great
that America has accepted and implemented the human right to education, since
every child has an equal and free opportunity to attend primary and secondary
schools. Yet, even after granting such
an opportunity they fail to provide quality education in many schools across
the nation. Therefore, even if a lot
more children have an access to education, they are not receiving quality
education. Thus, I argue the human right
to education should not only focus on quantity, but also quality of education
promised.
A balance demonstrating Quantity vs. Quality |
To
begin my case, first I would like to show my readers the existence of the
problem relating to the quality of education in America. A recent article on CNN titled “Radical Steps
for Struggling Schools” pointed out, “the Kansas City school board approved a
plan to close 29 out of its 61 public schools” in order “to fight the poor
quality of education there – quality so poor that the Superintendent says
diplomas given to graduates 'aren’t
worth the paper they’re printed on’” (Phillips). 29 out of 61 public school is almost half of
the school being closed due to poor quality education. Furthermore, the Superintendent’s statement
hits the bull’s eye as he says the diplomas are not worth anything. This shows even after attending high school
for four long years, student’s time involved did not equate to anything. To build on my argument, I will like my
readers to watch the President Barack Obama’s presidential speeches (CLICK HERE TO BE REDIRECTED TO THE VIDEO) as it highlights the severe situation with
the education quality in America. He
says, “We are being outpaced by other nations.
It is not that their kids are any smarter than ours; it is that they are
being smarter about how to educate their children. They are spending less time teaching things
that do not matter and more time teaching things that do. They are preparing their students not only
for high school or college but for a career, we are not. Our curriculum for eighth graders is two full
years behind top performing countries. That is a prescription for economic
decline… 4th grade readers in Mississippi are scoring nearly 70
points lower than students in Wyoming and they are getting the same grade. 8 of our states are setting their standards
so low that their students may end up on par with roughly the bottom 40% of the
world.” I am not promoting Obama and his
views on how to fix education, since everyone shares a different opinion on
that subject matter, but I am focusing on the facts he shares to highlight the
poor quality of education in America and its consequence. He carries his argument effectively to show
American citizens that quality of education needs to be improved. He successfully builds his ethos as a
respected politician and influential figure running for future president. He also perfectly builds the logos and pathos
of his argument through showering his audience with sentimental and attention
grabbing facts. Thus, through these two
reliable sources it is evident that education in America lacks quality, even
though education is available to everyone.
Now
you might be wondering even though the human right to education guarantees free
primary education and makes higher education equally accessible to every child,
it does not say anything about providing quality of education. This dilemma is tackled through simple deductive
reasoning. In my previous post I
mentioned education serves as an “enabling” right, which helps human beings
fulfill their naturally entitled right to life, liberty, and happiness. Therefore, it is intuitive that without
quality education, the human educational right fails to meet its purpose as an
“enabling” right. If people do not
receive quality education, they would not be about to gain the 21st
century skill set of problem solving, critical thinking, entrepreneurship and creativity
required to secure and achieve their natural rights. The human right to education does not only
operate to educate the most amount of people, but it also seeks to grant them
quality education. Thus, the right should
instead be called “the human right to quality education” and we need to pull together our collective actions to demand and ensure our government to fulfills their roles of
providing quantity along with quality education.
The picture above highlights our government's fight and progress for quality education. |
Phillips, Kyra. "Radical Steps for Struggling
Schools." CNN Newsroom RSS. CNN, 10 Mar. 2010. Web. 17 June
2014. <http://newsroom.blogs.cnn.com/2010/03/10/radical-steps-for-struggling-schools/?iref=allsearch>.
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